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ArcherOfTheAsylum

Archer's Asylum

I'm a big bloke (7ft tall) and I am forever reading. This will mostly be my thoughts as I am reading and possibly a review or two. You may know me as Archer.

 

I am basically a lurker. My life revolves around my wife, my cats, Books, and entertainment.

 

I'm working on building and setting up a forge and I'm generally one of those people who can be found causing or in the middle of mischief somewhere...

Eve Eden vs. the Zombie Horde (Bedeviled 1)

Eve Eden vs. the Zombie Horde (Bedeviled 1) - Suz Korb I just want to say that, just because I know Suz and talk with her regularly it doesn't mean she will get special treatment. I will be honest with my review when I've finished to book...REVIEW:I caved at 36%. I'm sorry Suz I tried I really did. The plot shows a lot of promise but I just couldn't read any more. It wasn't the gore, it wasn't the fart jokes. It was a little bit of the YA insta-love you had going on but mostly... it was because in my eyes this book needs a lot of polishing. There is a lot of passive voice in this book and it just made me feel detached. It felt like the action wasn't active. I was being told about it but not shown. I know I'm not your target demographic, but I can see this story has a lot of good potential you just need more experience with writing, and editing. I hope this doesn't put you off writing because I'm sure all authors go through similar stages in their development. It's all about practice. I honestly wish you all the very best of luck with your work in the future but at this moment in time... I didn't like it.*EDIT*I'm a little bit disheartened that Suz seems to have pulled this book, and disappeared from the face of the blogosphere after a few less than gushing reviews, in spite of all the praise she has gotten.